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张璐经典翻译

1.行百里者半九十。

张璐译文：Half of the people who have embarked on a one hundred mile journey may fall by the way side.

译文直译：在百里的旅途中，有一半人会在途中放弃。

点评：“fall by the way side”在英语中是半途而废的意思，用英语中的成语来翻译中国古语，对接得很巧妙。

2.华山再高，顶有过路。

张璐译文：No matter how high the mountain is,one can always ascend to its top.

译文直译：无论山有多高，我们都能登到顶峰。

点评：后半句翻译得非常好。always（一直）表现出誓要登顶的坚定信念。

3.亦余心之所向兮，虽九死其尤未悔。

张璐译文：For the ideal that I hold near to my heart,I'd not regret a thousand times to die.

译文直译：我遵从我内心的想法，即使要死千万次我也不会后悔。

点评：“九死”翻译成thousand times（上千次），很地道。

4.人或加讪，心无疵兮。

张璐译文：My conscience stays untainted inspite of rumors and slanders from the outside.

译文直译：我的良知纯洁没有污点，不管外界的流言飞语和造谣中伤。

点评：如果把my改成one's会更客观一些，总体来说用词非常好，把握得恰到好处。

5.兄弟虽有小忿，不废懿亲。

张璐译文：Differences between brothers can not sever their bloodties.

译文直译：兄弟之间的分歧，是无法割断他们的血脉亲情的。

点评：“小忿”有愤恨的意思，在极短的时间内，能想到用differents（分歧），而不是用angry等表示愤怒的词，非常有急智，比较得体。

附录：整句翻译

1.我们应该记住这样一条古训：行百里者半九十。

We should always remember this important thing, that is, half of the people who have embarked on a one hundred mile journey may fall by the wayside.

2.同时我们要坚定信心，华山再高，顶有过路。

We must reinforce our confidence: no matter how high the mountain is, one can always ascend to its top.

3.我深深爱着我的国家，没有一片土地让我这样深情和激动，没有一条河流让我这样沉思和起伏。亦余心之所向兮，虽九死其尤未悔。我将以此明志，做好今后三年的工作。

I have deep love for this country. I love every inch of its land. I love every river that flows on this piece of earth with deep passion and deep affection. For the ideal that I hold dear to my heart, I will not regret a thousand times to die. With this strong commitment, I will continue to devote myself to my work in the next three years.

4.中国有一句古语，人或加讪，心无疵兮。

As a Chinese proverb goes, my conscience stays untainted in spite of rumors and slanders from the outside.

5.我知道商签协议是一个复杂的过程，但是正因为我们是兄弟，兄弟虽有小忿，不废懿亲，问题总会可以解决的。

I understand the negotiation may be a complex process, but differences between brothers cannot sever their blood ties, and I believe that problems will eventually be solved.

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